Character Planning - Revision history

Admin: /* Ideas */

2022-04-27T20:11:08Z

‎Ideas

Admin: /* Boss */

2022-04-27T20:04:41Z

‎Boss

Admin: /* Spectrepunks */

2021-12-23T21:02:17Z

‎Spectrepunks

Admin: /* Boss */

2021-12-23T20:50:46Z

‎Boss

Admin: /* Ideas */

2021-12-15T19:00:47Z

‎Ideas

Admin: /* 06 Canis [3] */

2020-07-16T20:30:31Z

‎06 Canis [3]

Admin: /* 09 Panthera [3] */

2020-07-16T20:27:28Z

‎09 Panthera [3]

Admin: /* 08 Accipiter [0] */

2020-07-16T20:23:46Z

‎08 Accipiter [0]

Admin: /* 08 Accipiter [0] */

2020-07-16T20:23:35Z

‎08 Accipiter [0]

Admin: /* 01 Oscines [3] */

2020-07-16T20:21:10Z

‎01 Oscines [3]

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:11, 27 April 2022
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	** I think maybe this'd be more interesting with some personal history between the two. Perhaps went from a Rev that genuinely liked the boss, then defected.		** I think maybe this'd be more interesting with some personal history between the two. Perhaps went from a Rev that genuinely liked the boss, then defected.

		+	===Misc Todo Notes===

		+	* I think things take off when I start making connections, so basically what I need now is to establish character relationships. From there, the web will probably start building itself.
		+	* The main thing is finding character inspiration - I have not really done character personality analysis in quite a while, so I should examine some characters I enjoy maybe

	[[Category:Todo]]		[[Category:Todo]]

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 * Capitalist? boss. Responsible for the evil decisions made by the big company.
 * Appearance:
 ** She doesn't have a name yet. Butch, looks ambiguously feline/canine. Head shape including ears looks wolfish, but muzzle is chunkier. Nose is more catlike and canines have sabertooth tiger energy.
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 ** Wears suits, especially with a waistcoat and tie. Looks upper-class businesswoman without being too garishly decorated.
 * Personality:
-** Gives off the impression of being charming, able to make polite small talk with a bit of a humorous streak. K<span>nows the effect she has on people.</span>
+** Gives off the impression of being charming, able to make polite small talk with a bit of a humorous streak. Looks kind and soft, but is firm with her stances. K<span>nows the effect she has on people.</span>
 ** Honestly very guarded. Her family was very protective of their wealth and so is she. Doesn't trust people, and is always evaluating their responses to decide her next move.
 ** With an apocalypse having happened not long before her and possibly another in her lifetime if she fails to maintain the generator's productivity, she's constantly battling with a very poor outlook on her future.
-** She fears that if she doesn't run the company with an iron fist, some vulture will try and usurp her position and wealth.
+** She fears that if she doesn't run the company with an iron fist, some vulture will try and usurp her position and wealth, or the city will simply die out.
 ** Cynical as a result. The wealth brings her comfort, safety and power, but also is an inescapable burden.
 ** Instead of giving it up and solving problems for the people, she chooses to double down on the unsustainable path of sapping the land dry and making her workers bleed so that she can live whatever little of her visible future in comfort.
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 *** Keep company going
 *** Immortality
-**** Interested in using Rev technology to obtain an immortal body, but won't do it just yet. Plans to continue R&D for Rev technology and then use it when it's sufficiently durable and soul capture is more certain.<br />
+**** Interested in using Rev technology to obtain an immortal body, but won't do it just yet. Plans to continue R&D for Rev technology and then use it when it's sufficiently durable and soul capture is more certain. Perhaps a little afraid even then, and trying to hold out until a human body just won't survive.<br />
 *** Views on/relationship with the company:<br />
 **** Inherited the company. Has continued her family legacy in keeping the generator going at a decent rate so far; is competent and intelligent.

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 * They also tend to be older Revs, as newer skeleton models have some features to prevent them from being entirely untraceable if the horns are removed. (Any Revs that attempt this are supposed to be terminated on sight.)
 * They're not affiliated with Reon and may or may not have similar thoughts about destroying the funnel.
+* However, a lot of them are old and tired and would rather wait for a good opportunity than risk themselves for no reason. There's not much organisation to speak of, and most wouldn't want to take command, so nothing gets done.
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 ===Boss===
-* Capitalist boss. Responsible for the evil decisions made by the big company.
+* Capitalist? boss. Responsible for the evil decisions made by the big company.
-* She doesn't have a name yet. Butch, looks ambiguously feline/canine.
+* Appearance:
-* "Normal" expressions are very polite/modest. A bit reminiscent of hatless Ralsei, but not so cutesy. Actual expressions are more feral/reveal more teeth.
+** She doesn't have a name yet. Butch, looks ambiguously feline/canine. Head shape including ears looks wolfish, but muzzle is chunkier. Nose is more catlike and canines have sabertooth tiger energy.
-* Intends to squeeze every last drop of soul energy she can get. Will allow living people to get chewed up for it, and then will blame the Revs for negligence in public statements.
+** Hair is neat and parted on the left. This is an attempt to look neat, but her body fur is more unruly and gives her a little ruff above her collar. Long heraldric lion tail.
-* Interested in using Rev technology to obtain an immortal body, but won't do it just yet. Plans to continue R&D for Rev technology and then use it when it's sufficiently durable.
+** "Normal" expressions are very polite/modest. A bit reminiscent of hatless Ralsei, but not so cutesy. Actual expressions are more feral/reveal more teeth.
-* In the meantime, restricts any travel out of the city, citing safety concerns. Doesn't want anyone to leave.
+** Wears suits, especially with a waistcoat and tie. Looks upper-class businesswoman without being too garishly decorated.
+* Personality:
 ===Spectrepunks===

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 retired, 1 never came back. Last one is considering retirement, but new blood is coming in soon and they want to hold out for it.
-== Ideas ==
+==Ideas==
 ===Heterochromic===
 * Heterochromic Rev who was a Stray who consumed a Rev and became a Rev to atone
-=== Prismatic ===
+===Prismatic===
 * Prismatic Rev who went missing years ago, presumed lost by most
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 * Big antagonist, but the true antagonist is capitalism
 * Their original desire was to free the Revs, eventually shifting on to collapsing the system by damaging it enough that it can no longer function, which would forcefully eliminate the need for Revs to exist. It's somewhat simplistic, but the world is better equipped to use other energy sources now, and they feel the only way to get them to do it is to stop them from being dependent on the generator, cold turkey
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 === 06 Canis [3] ===
 Has the most firepower of the generalised task teams. Members are quite eager to get on the scene.
 === 07 Cervus [3] ===

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 === 09 Panthera [3] ===
 The trump card, the facility's elite. Lightning quick and experienced. The team is very close and has not seen any changes in roster in years.
 === 10 Salmo [0] ===

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 === 08 Accipiter [0] ===
 Non-existent but for one member: Synth. Currently appointed the Prof's guard.
-'''Synth [Raptor]''' : Permanently annoyed. Also looks permanently sleep-deprived, even though Revs don't technically need sleep (aside from the psychological effect of taking a rest).
+<br />'''Synth [Raptor]''' : Permanently annoyed. Also looks permanently sleep-deprived, even though Revs don't technically need sleep (aside from the psychological effect of taking a rest).
 === 09 Panthera [3] ===

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 === 01 Oscines [3] ===
 Typically patrols the furthest outskirts of the city. Barely populated areas. Simultaneously the most boring yet highest risk.
-??? [Crow] - Team leader
+<br />'''??? [Crow] (Team leader)''' : Terrible laugh. An obasan of the variety that has stopped caring about her self-image, except that is her intended self-image. Takes great delight in unsettling people. But her cronies are loyal to her and she's good at making snap decisions.
-??? [Cat]
+<br />'''??? [Cat]''' : A small...gremlin. Very twitchy. Stares right through you.
-??? [Barn owl]
+<br />'''??? [Barn owl]''' : Looks extremely unsettling. Actually somewhat anxious and defers to the other two for decisions. Doesn't talk to anyone else.
 === 02 Squalus [3] ===